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** I ''think'' maybe the verses are 4:3:2:2 and the choruses are 4:3:2:3, but I'll have to listen more closely.
** I ''think'' maybe the verses are 4:3:2:2 and the choruses are 4:3:2:3, but I'll have to listen more closely.
==Words==
==Words==
{|
|-
|
<poem>
<poem>
I'm hell on wheels
I'm
It's hell because
in hell on wheels
just because
you're not riding here by my side
you're not riding here by my side
but you were right
but you were right
you would have hated this ride
that you would have hated this ride
the road signs are full of lies
the road signs are full of lies
twisted lines that tangled you up inside
twisted lines tangled you up inside.


Chorus:
Chorus:
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:I'll... be... an angel
:I'll... be... an angel
:Without you by my side,
:Without you by my side,
:it can't get any worse.
:it can hardly get worse.
:There's a few things coming down
:There's a few things coming down
:before it's time to leave this town
:before it's time to leave this town
:and check out of this Motel Universe.
:and check out of this Motel Universe.
 
</poem>
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<poem>
Can't we please please turn around
Can't we please please turn around
Every minute I drive takes me further away from your smile
Every minute I ride takes me further away from your smile
But I know... I'll be at the end in awhile
But I know...
I'll be at the end in awhile
I can't even hear your voice
I can't even hear your voice
Over all this motor noise
Over all this motor noise
But you know I had no choice.
But I guess I made that choice.


''(instrumental verse-part)''
''(instrumental verse-part)''
I see your loving face
I see your loving face
Smiling down on me from that place
Smiling down on me from that place
I hope all these wrong turns take me there
I hope all of these wrong turns take me there


''[chorus]''
My world ended the day that we parted ways
 
My world ended the day
that we parted ways
and you saw it was your time to fly
and you saw it was your time to fly
so for now here I'll stay
so here I am
until we together are ghost riders up in the sky.
'til we're ghost riders up in the sky
The early morning sun
The early morning sun
brings a light when the night is done
brings a light when the night is done
and it's time to face another one.
and it's time to face another one.
''[chorus]''
</poem>
</poem>
|}

Latest revision as of 18:00, 30 August 2024

  • origin: the first line of the chorus came to me in a dream, with music, around 3am on 2019-09-18. I had it about 75% written within half an hour or so, then had to keep it all in my head for ~4 hours until I could get up and write it down.
  • music: starts in D major; beat is 4:2:3:(2? 3?) @ 66 bpm
    • I think maybe the verses are 4:3:2:2 and the choruses are 4:3:2:3, but I'll have to listen more closely.

Words

I'm
in hell on wheels
just because
you're not riding here by my side
but you were right
that you would have hated this ride
the road signs are full of lies
twisted lines tangled you up inside.

Chorus:
I'll... be... an angel
and I'll play the game
no matter how much it hurts
I'll... be... an angel
Without you by my side,
it can hardly get worse.
There's a few things coming down
before it's time to leave this town
and check out of this Motel Universe.

Can't we please please turn around
Every minute I ride takes me further away from your smile
But I know...
I'll be at the end in awhile
I can't even hear your voice
Over all this motor noise
But I guess I made that choice.

(instrumental verse-part)
I see your loving face
Smiling down on me from that place
I hope all of these wrong turns take me there

My world ended the day that we parted ways
and you saw it was your time to fly
so here I am
'til we're ghost riders up in the sky
The early morning sun
brings a light when the night is done
and it's time to face another one.

[chorus]