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==Words== | ==Words== | ||
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I'm hell on wheels | I'm | ||
in hell on wheels | |||
just because | |||
you're not riding here by my side | you're not riding here by my side | ||
but you were right | but you were right | ||
you would have hated this ride | that you would have hated this ride | ||
the road signs are full of lies | the road signs are full of lies | ||
twisted lines | twisted lines tangle you up inside | ||
Chorus: | Chorus: | ||
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Can't we please please turn around | Can't we please please turn around | ||
Every minute I | Every minute I ride takes me further away from your smile | ||
But I know... I'll be at the end in awhile | But I know... | ||
I'll be at the end in awhile | |||
I can't even hear your voice | I can't even hear your voice | ||
Over all this motor noise | Over all this motor noise | ||
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My world ended the day that we parted ways | My world ended the day that we parted ways | ||
and you saw it was your time to fly | and you saw it was your time to fly | ||
so here I am | so here I am | ||
ghost riders up in the sky | 'til we're ghost riders up in the sky | ||
The early morning sun | The early morning sun | ||
brings a light when the night is done | brings a light when the night is done |
Revision as of 14:15, 1 January 2023
- origin: the first line of the chorus came to me in a dream, with music, around 3am on 2019-09-18. I had it about 75% written within half an hour or so, then had to keep it all in my head for ~4 hours until I could get up and write it down.
- music: starts in D major; beat is 4:2:3:(2? 3?) @ 66 bpm
- I think maybe the verses are 4:3:2:2 and the choruses are 4:3:2:3, but I'll have to listen more closely.
Words
I'm
in hell on wheels
just because
you're not riding here by my side
but you were right
that you would have hated this ride
the road signs are full of lies
twisted lines tangle you up inside
Chorus:
I'll... be... an angel
and I'll play the game
no matter how much it hurts
I'll... be... an angel
Without you by my side,
it can hardly get worse.
There's a few things coming down
before it's time to leave this town
and check out of this Motel Universe.
Can't we please please turn around
Every minute I ride takes me further away from your smile
But I know...
I'll be at the end in awhile
I can't even hear your voice
Over all this motor noise
But you know I had no choice.
(instrumental verse-part)
I see your loving face
Smiling down on me from that place
I hope all of these wrong turns take me there
My world ended the day that we parted ways
and you saw it was your time to fly
so here I am
'til we're ghost riders up in the sky
The early morning sun
brings a light when the night is done
and it's time to face another one.
[chorus]